Sunday, 11 July 2010

untitiled

I'm not happy with this page but I don't know why, so I thought rather than have it on my desk and worry about it, I'd upload it, then I'll probably get some divine inspiration.  There is no title either - it was the first paddle in the sea and Chris was surprised how warm and clear the sea actually was.

Any suggestions for improvement would be welcome:)

2 comments:

Maria said...

well theres nothign wrong with it to my mind. If anything you could move the journal spot over to under/overlapping with the photos on the right hand side - it looks a bit unanchored there. As for a title - well you could just call it first paddle or paddling or wet feet or something... I'll carry on thinking about it

Mini said...

Just add water...